What Is Wrong With This Career Statement?

by **Guest** » July 13th, 2014, 4:20 pm

The grammatical blunder is sufficient basis for disqualification.

Yehmmy · by **Yehmmy** » August 1st, 2011, 8:32 am

The CV will most likely land in waste bin due to grammatical blunder.

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NiceGuy · by **NiceGuy** » July 5th, 2011, 6:33 pm

@ade22, u are such a bomb! Dats exactly what i was about suggesting. Job seekers should stop copy and paste kinda cv, be creative and be submissive and humble enough to give others to proofread d sh*t for u. Its for your good. Lmao!

ade22 · by **ade22** » February 3rd, 2011, 11:21 am

Agent wrote:CAREER OBJECTIVE
A self- Motivated person, hard work, Ready to learn and Adapt easily to work under pressure, Tolerance and Discipline.

How about:

A self-motivated and hardworking young man/lady ready to learn and adapt easily, and capable of working under pressure with tolerance and discipline.

Beat that! :w':

Bestnaija · by **Bestnaija** » January 30th, 2011, 12:57 am

This thread was created to generate collective contributions needed to get a better career statement out of the blunder. Rather than raining criticisms and stopping there, lets submit suggestions. Thank you.

frankaddey · by **frankaddey** » January 13th, 2011, 9:25 pm

going by d law of lexis nd structure ds candidate is out.

Erudite · by **Erudite** » January 13th, 2011, 2:30 pm

Agent wrote:Jobseeker wrote:
CAREER OBJECTIVE
A self- Motivated person, hard work, Ready to learn and Adapt easily to work under pressure, Tolerance and Discipline.

As an erudite professor, I'd rather say that this career objective is sooo disappointing. Your CV is not supposed to be a child's play. This job seeker is not organised, and he does not even know the importance of what he is writing. Am sure he never gave this to anybody to proof-read. The grammartical blunders therein are sufficient reasons to squeeze the CV and throw it into a waste bin.
Lets work on that first.

Bestnaija · by **Bestnaija** » January 13th, 2011, 1:44 pm

Jobseeker wrote:CAREER OBJECTIVE
A self- Motivated person, hard work, Ready to learn and Adapt easily to work under pressure, Tolerance and Discipline.

Hi guys, lets work together here. If you happen to be an employer, and you have a pile of CVs in front of you, all you need to do is to find reasons why you need to reject 985 CVs out of about 1,000.
So, tell me: from the above mission statement, what would you find: A good reason to accept it for further consideration, or reasons to squeeze it and dump in the waste bin?
Lets work together and refine the above statement. We can do this.