A poem: OH! WHY NOW? - Written by Blessing Chinenye David

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Blessing David
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May 15th, 2020, 7:27 am

Oh! Why now

We started together
When my sun has not risen
When I was still bound with the chains of poverty
She was right beside me
When I lost all hope
She was there to console me
I loved with all my heart
Because of the good quality of patience that she bears
She was indeed virtue personified
Day and night I thought of what to do
To legally have her as my wife
The mother of my children
My heart and my love
She was the queen of my heart
My beauty and my only lover
I vowed to make her most enviable amongst all the women
I loved her with my life
Her presence was my happiness
My love for her was unavoidable


So I decided to visit the city
I left to make cool money
I decided to make money by all means
So that I can return back
And marry my angel
She was always in my heart
Though I was far from her
But it seemed as if we where close to each other
Our heart beats clocks together
Over there in the city I hammered
Yes! I made cool money
God blessed me with riches
Oh! My dreams and fantancy to have her beside me permanently
Has finally been achieved
I could not wait to set my eyes on her again
Immediately I returned back to the village
Rushed down to her house
Her mum and all the family members
Ran out to greet and welcome me
But she was nowhere to be found
Well! I thought she might be in the bathroom
I was so anxious to know where she was
Then I decide to ask about her
The queen of my heart
Whom I have missed so much
I needed to hug and give her a hot kiss
After a long time
She needed to perceive the sweet fragrance of money around me
She needed to eat from where she have sown
I asked about her the second time
No one answered me
I was filled with confusion
I wondered why everyone kept me silent
In the midst of my confusion
Her mum bursted out in tears
As she gave me the sad news
That my love was dead
Oh! What a tragedy
I could not believe my ears
The money which I was to spread on her as she dances for me fell off my hands
I went on my kneels and asked God ,why?
Why he allowed my only lover to die
I couldn't even set my eyes on her again at least for the last time

But it was still like a film to me
Not until I was taken to her grave
Oh! Why my beauty
Why now?
Why did you have to leave me now that I have made money for us to enjoy
?
Why did you have to leave me now that we supposed to have each other close permanently?
U never left me when I was hopless and helpless
U did not die when I was a nobody
Why now?
Oh! ,will i ever come out this pain
I really loved her so much
Who can ever treat me like her
Oh!, I don't think anyone can ever represent her in my life
She was so special to me
Even though she is no more I will still love ,honour and respect her.
She was a virtues woman.

A poem Written by blessing chinenye David
A poem OH! WHY NOW? written by blessing chinenye David
A poem OH! WHY NOW? written by blessing chinenye David

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eMade
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May 15th, 2020, 8:55 am

So touching and sad.

As I followed the story, I thought the dude is gonna find out she marred another dude because of impatience or pressure. Not expecting she was gonna be snatched by the cold hands of death

What a tragedy poem.

Great job, Blessing! :clap:
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May 15th, 2020, 1:21 pm

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May 15th, 2020, 4:04 pm

Wow
Just wow
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May 15th, 2020, 10:21 pm

RIMZY23 wrote:love it
Same here. :clap:
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May 19th, 2020, 5:05 pm

the poem is wonderful but ended sadly
"We must use time wisely and forever realize that the time is always ripe to do right."
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May 19th, 2020, 7:17 pm

green20 wrote:the poem is wonderful but ended sadly
Yea. I don't like sad endings
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May 20th, 2020, 6:12 am

eMade wrote:
green20 wrote:the poem is wonderful but ended sadly
me too
Yea. I don't like sad endings
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May 20th, 2020, 6:17 am

Sorry to post this here but admin, the site is malfunctioning, when I try to go to the home page it says invalid referral name
I dislike investigators
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May 20th, 2020, 7:01 am

Hernandez Nicole wrote:Sorry to post this here but admin, the site is malfunctioning, when I try to go to the home page it says invalid referral name
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September 9th, 2020, 11:31 am

Oh love this
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April 19th, 2021, 7:49 pm

Blessing weldone
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